Monday, May 27, 2013
MY LAST SUMMER
WRITING
Last summer I did nothing special, but I had a good time
The summer school
In the summer I went to a summer school. There we sang, we danced and we prepare theater shows. I liked it a lot.
Also I met new people there.
In the end we prepared a play.
The summer camp
I went to the camp in the Jonquera with my frineds.
We did many activities like: Walking, games, swim in the pool, talking,...
After spending in the house there was a fire there and the house was hurnt.
Other
The rest of the summer I was doing school work, with friends and family.
But I also went to the beach or the lake
Conclusions
I had a good time because I went to the summer camp
I liked swim in the lake.
THIS SUMMER WAS FANTASIC!
ORAL PRESENTATION OBSERVATION
1. PRESENTATION
Did the powerpoint help your presentation? Yes, my powerpoint help my presentation
Did you talk/show the photos to the audience? No, I didn't talk the photos
2.BODY LANGUAGE/EYE CONTACT
Did you look at the audience most of the time?
Did you stop to separate the different parts of your speech? Yes, did stop to separate
Did you smile and the gestures yo hold the attention ot the audience? Yes, I smile and I had gestures
3. STRUCTURE
Did you introduce yourserf and the topic? Not too much
Did tou organise your ideas before start? No, I didn't organise in the start
Did you use discourse markers? (first, then, later..) No, I didn't use the discourse makers
Did you finish it properly? Yes, did finish properly
4. CONTENT
Was the information too long/short? The information it was short
Did you introduce interesting information for the audience? I don't know
5. LANGUAGE
Are the any inportant grammar mistakes? Which ones? Verbs? Vocabulary?
Did you use sentence linekers? and/but... Yes, I use the sentences linkers
Did you use new vocabulary from the dictionary? Wich words? Yes, I don't know
Did you use fillers? Well, you know, for exemple, one second.... No, I don't use fillers
6. PRONUNCIATION/INTONATION
Did you know how to pronunce all the words? Did you check the dictionary, a classmate or your teacher Some words
Did you speak calm and slowly? Yes, I think so
Did you change your tone or you used the same monotone? I changed my tone
Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I speed fluid continuum
7. SELF-EVELUATION
You are your teacher! What mark did you get? 7
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